With all that is going on right now, my peers; Emily, Holly and Alex decided to have a group call to give each other help and guidance to where we are now and how we can make our work the best it can be.
I wanted feedback on my website in particular due to it being an endless play around with the layout and content and also due to wanting to have the best platform for my career.
The comments were;
love the logo - its sick and represents you well
perhaps have icons but some gifs?
like the layout of the one project tho - its good that you can't see the whole image as makes you want to look further
perhaps get rid of the last project - or just keep the picture of me and the Hallmark winner
change the last project to be a stronger one??
most have really good pics or mockups so for the menu for example maybe find a mockup??
or for the menu have the in context pictures first on the website....
mock up the stamps to look like a stamp - more in context
For Oliver Bonas have the gif as the first visual
Find a fry looks so professional !
Naresh - artistic director for advertising gave Holly this good portfolio advice:
to structure your description;
insight - simple truth
idea - sentence
How you brought it to life - responded
The crit was helpful due to us all helping each other and giving support and motivation in this crazy time! Was good to help each other and to motivate each other to create the best of this hard situation. From this talk I'm going to develop my website even further with having more in context pictures and to have a different project last.
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