reflective - screen print bits that are reflective - like the disco ball
character should be all the same size on the j card - as looks off balance rn
the design - too cut off - needs to be all together more to reflect movement
try with overlayed pattern
scene - people In background, like a club illustration, with like abba, meatballs etc - like the parklike posters but with Swedish things - wheres Wally
ikea - where it says go this way on the floor, like the dance game with the arrows
ikea catalogue - instead of the prices have the track titles
black lines over neon paper
neon coming through
using gold ink or foiling
perhaps go with the tacky more
typeface - just for the title and use a smaller copy
not just pink
good starting point
with this feedback, it is clear that to develop the j card it would be good to have a party scene as this also highlights the fun, family, party sense to the genre and the shows related to it. When screen printing I should experiment with having the colourful neon paper and the black lines but also try overlaying and using a gold shimmer too.
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