2nd one to one session feedback

when referencing - say who they are and a bit of background so the reader understands
good start to the essay - what you've wrote is good - needs a more clear structure though
clear structure of perhaps 3 chapters
reference any events
examples - so to explain the man child and what you're mentioning etc
a chapter on infantilization - not to assume and stat the its only relevant in certain ways
examples of what I'm stating and for and against
kawaii as a chapter
how things are diverse with the internet - small % in the subculture though
semiotics - can fit into anthropomorphic chapter?? the evidence can mention about seeing a smile - hw certain logos use it and the effect (show and explain examples)
more examples - less case studies etc

Chapter 1 (different elements and paragraphs that go into the one subject matter) 

pratical - find a range of old and current first - don't restrain yet
could combine - be creative with it
could remove a mascot
find more contemporary - such as carrot the Kevin etc etc


Chapters

Infantilization
Kawaii
Anthropomorphism